3/09/2009

Will you be mine?

Will you be mine?
-dhianz

When I met you
I thought you will just gonna be there for a while
Eventhough you became my friend
Still I didn’t think the friendship will even go as far as one mile.

However the more we talk
The more I get confuse
What is this feeling that I have?
That makes my mind and heart turned loose.

A slightest thought of you
Gives me a butterfly in my stomach.
Thinking you’ll be mine
Speed my heartbeat like I’m gonna have a heart attack.

Then if I don’t talk to you nor hear from you
It seems that I’m having a chest pain
I can’t really breathe and there is no air
It is true even though it sounds corny and insane.

Why do I always miss you?
Is it love or I’m just fond of you?
Is it just me?
Oh how I wish you’re feeling the same thing too.

I always think of you
That makes my head spin and drives me crazy
And most of the time I’d rather dream of you
Do nothing and yeah you also make me lazy.

You may not be the most handsome guy out there
And funny because you’re not even close to my ideal guy
But I don’t think it matters because my heart doesn’t really care
All I know it beats for you and even I can’t explain why.

I guess I really haven fallen inlove with you
Because I feel that my heart don’t belong to me anymore
Or maybe I’m just really out of my mind
Like how I always dream that it is me and you forevermore.

You became part of me for a short period of time
So if I lose you I don’t really know how to survive
But if that time comes that you became part of someone else
I’d probably just gonna to the ocean eventhough I can’t swim and dive.

I don’t really know what I’m saying
Nor why I’m trying to write a poem
I just probably wanted to ask
Will you be mine? And what is the word jeroboam?

naks!... bawal ang violent reaction.. daz my first poem ever!... malufet... 'la lang.. naisipan koh lang gumawa kahit walah sa system koh... naaliw lang kc akoh last time may nabasa akong tula ren kina Kuya CM, Kuya EJ, Ms. Juyjuy, Handsome, Oracle, Kuya Mike... syempre na-inspired na ren sa mga magagaling tlgah sa paggawa nang tula tulad nila Kuya DH at syempre ang malufet na si Marco Paolo... hihinga lang may tula nah.. =)... hanggang sa muli folkz... have a nice day yah'll..


update w/ princess dee: ---still sick... i got cough, fever and headache... 3 in one... parang nescafe lang... lolz.. sickness na nga papatawa pah... yeah... i'm juz gonna get some rest... so pag nde nyo akoh maramdaman... itz not cuz i'm bz... itz juz dat i'm still not feelin' well... 'sayang 'la ang aking prince to take good care of meeh... =)


Godbless! -di

23 comments:

  1. Based ata ako!!! hehehe


    Wow... di raw marunong gumawa ng tula... e ano tawag mo dito? hehehe


    magaling... ganda ng poem!!!

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  2. Ako madami na akong nagawang tula..pero walang kabuluhan ang mga yown. Maganda 'tong tula mo di! Keep up the good work. Gawa ka pa!

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  3. wow!
    ANG GALING sis di! haha. talagang nakacapslock pa. hehe. pero ang ganda sis. congrats sa first poem, ang galing na kagad.. pano na kaya yung mga next poems mo e di mas lalong maganda.
    tsk tsk. keep it up sis. may new poet in the making tayo dito.

    aw. teka, para kanino ba yan ah? ahihi.

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  4. sige na nga... di ako magkukumento... hehehe... sino ba tong pinatutunguhan ng tulang ito?


    =p

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  5. Wow, inspired by other bloggers ha.. Nice. Ibang klse nga eh noh, hihinga lang sila, ahaha! Mga talented mga tao dito ah.. Keep it up!

    cheers

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  6. May mga nagawa din akong tula, pero di ko na alm kung nasan na yung notebook na yun, naiwan ko sa BAguio.. huhu.. Sana naitago nya yun. Sayang naman.. Nung college kasi ako nung panahong paduguan ang utak sa paggawa ng case study eh mas gugustuhin kong maupo sa inidoro habang nagsusulat ng tula.. Kaya hayun, uupo lang ako sa inidoro may tula na ko.. Nyaha! Masarap magsulat pag-inspired ka, lalo na pag may dahilan talaga, with feelings pa. Mas madadala ang nakikibasa.. Kumusta ka naman bah? Wala eh di ko talaga kaya mga mala-nobela mong comment eh, panalo ka pa rin, kaya ito na lang..:D Way to go DI!

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  7. Huwaaaw!

    yahoooo! Mukhang sobrang in love ha!

    Sana mabasa nito ang taong tinutukoy mo.... Ang swerte naman niya. =)

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  8. lolz..

    hinanap ko tuloy Jeroboam na yan!....pano nasali ang Jeroboam dito e King naman pala yan at isang bote ng alak...lolz..

    Adik!...hahahaha..


    pero teka,hanglufeet ng tula mo a..tulala ako...naks..

    blogger din ba ang pinapatamaan mo neto o si neeon guy na nabanggit mo dati sa blog mo?...hahahaha


    nice one Dee....

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  9. inspired by ....? secret? lam mo sabi ng mga poetry writers kailangan inspired ka kung gagawa kng poem...tsk - naks inspirasyon!!!

    mapalad yun lalakeng yun, saan pa sya dba? eh di kay princee dhee na! smile lng sistah - malufet maenlababo ika nga ni AMorski, tc n hav fun! God bless!

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  10. aba aba aba...

    napatulala este napatula si gandang dee..inspired ka noh!

    sino ba siya?

    jeroboam-jumbled word ata yan?hehehe

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  11. naks nga! ayun alam ko na kung bakit matagal kang nawala...nagmuni muni ka pala habang nakangiti at timitingin sa mga dahon kasabay ng ihip ng hangin!

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  12. ...san san akoh nakakarating.. mag-reply kaya akoh d2 noh.. lolz... hmmnnzz....


    to Fafa Marc: yan para maiba naman... wehehe...naka-based kah... congratulations! you get a free hug!.. lolz.. yan *hugz*.. lolz.. di tulah yan.. lyrics nang kanta yan... hehe... yeah inspired daw akoh by the great poets in blogsphere eh... naks!.. isa kah don sa malufet na manunula... i was inspired by you.. naks! ingatz lagi... have a nice day... =)


    to Tingting: uy! salamat sa pagdaan... thanks sa compliments moh... 'ung sau kala moh lang walang makabuluhan... ang tula naman eh kahit ano lang naman... at least 'un galing sau... gawa moh... kaw ang author.. oh devah malufet... ingatz lagi.. =)


    to Kuya Gillboard:... ahh pinapatunguhan nyan?... ahh papunta kah Casper the friendly ghost... lolz.. korni.. salamat sa pagdaan kuyah... =)


    to Sis Jo: uy! SALAMAT! sa compliment.. yan... naka-cops lock den pasasalamat koh... lolz... gawa pah akoh?... haha.. 'la sa system koh... pero sige request moh... pag-iisipan koh... lolz... para kanino... ibulong... *binulong*... ayonz... sikreto lang naten 'un sistah... ingatz... =)

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  13. to Ms. Pretty Dylan: oo nga eh malufet.. hihinga lang may poem na agad.. pag hinga nilah as in makikita moh 'ung mga words naglalabasan sa bibig nilah... wehe.. ang korni.. lolz.. =)


    to Ms. Pretty Dylan uletz: wehe... akala koh malufet na 'ung hihinga pa lang may poem nah.. eh mas malufet kah palah eh... uupo lagn sa inidoro eh may poem nah... kaw ang pinakamalufet sa malufet.. wehe... tara punta tayo sa baguio... tulungan kitah hanapin 'ung notebook.. lolz.. haha.. malanobelang komentz na sometimes walang sense na atah.. tsk!.. yeah kapag inspired nga noh.. at yeah may feelings pah tlgah... hahahayz.. lolz.. aliw nga akoh sau eh... naka-2 koments kah.. pagsamahin moh nobela nah 'un.. ingatz lagi ms. pretty dylan... ika moh nga... powerhugz! =)


    to Oracle: yahoo... salamat sa pagkoment at pagdaan... haha.. inluv daw bah?... sino nagsabi sau?.. lolz.. wehe... oo nga sana mabasa ni Casper d' friendly ghost.. lolz.. =)


    to Kuya EJ: adik! lolz.. sinearch tlgah ang jeroboam eh noh... wehehe... *apir* kuya EJ!.. lolz... 'la kayang mai-rhyme sa poem... kaya yonz... jeroboam... malufet!.. lolz.. neon guy.. toinks! matanda nah 'un.. ano kah bah... adik!... ingatz kah lagi kuya EJ ha... pagaling kah ha... akoh ren papagaling.. *ubo* *ubo*... yan isa sa sakit koh.. at may time sa gabi at night na parang lalagnatin akoh... then slight headache... i think i really need to get some rest... kaw den... pagaling... *hugz*... =)

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  14. to Kuya DH: masyado na kitang kinuletz sa page koh.. ano pa bah irereply koh sau d2?.. lolz.. sendali.. ok... naks! sino bah 'ung inspirasyon nah 'un?.. oo nga eh.. san pah syah?.. eh di kay princess dee nah... lolz... ingatz lagi kuya DH... oh yeah ganda 'ung game nah 'un.. Super Mario... kaw si Luigi.... lolz.. u guyz gotta find the princess (dee).. lolz.. ingatz.. =)


    to Handsome: haha... napatulala... yeah napatulala sa tulah.. ayonz... weheh... mas malufet ang definition moh nang jeroboam... jumbled world lang... sige nga handsome.. paki-jumble... wehe... =)


    to Kuya Mulong: magmumuni-muni na lang akoh ba't pah sa mga dahon... wehe.. lolz.. naglasing ka na naman kuya mulong noh... lolz.. 'la bz lang non kaya i was gone w/ d' wind.. lolz... ba't bah akoh nag-explain... salamat sa pagdaan... =)


    ... still kinda sick... *ubo* *ubo*.. yan... i think i really need to get some rest... ingatz.. Godbless yah'll =)

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  15. lols... nahawaan ka?
    hahaha tingin ko magsisimula na naman ang walang hanggang pagtutula..
    very nice... teka, sinu ba inspirasyun mo dito? taena nakakainggit naman..

    hehehe

    sige sige kitakits

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  16. Nyek, malufet bah?! ahahah! May pinapatamaan ka ba talaga sa poem mo dito sa blog.. Sinu kaya yun? Na-curious tuloy ako!!!

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  17. ahehe. parang nasesense ko kung para kanino yan sis ah. para ba yan kay *bulong din*? ahehe. sige secret lng natin.. lol.

    pagaling ka sis. rest well and take your meds.. get well soon sistah! hugs!

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  18. ayon!!! nag emote adik!!!

    NO AIR!!!!
    tell me how am i supposed to breathe with NO AIR!!! nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!!

    inlove na inlove ang lola moh!

    para kanino ba yan?
    kilala ko ba? hehehehehe....

    dapat magkaron na ng poem contest dito sa blogsphere eh...
    and much better gawin na ring tag yan... nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!!

    magandang tanghali di!!!

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  19. jeroboam? cool!

    i think you're in love and inspired hence you were able to write such direct and sweet poetry :)

    darating din ang prince charming mo who will take care of you. God plans you to end up with the man you deserve.

    God bless, Di.

    ---

    hays..everytime you gave those flattering comments, i always find myself speechless. wala akong masabi kung 'di salamat :)

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  20. "Why do I always miss you?
    Is it love or I’m just fond of you?
    Is it just me?
    Oh how I wish you’re feeling the same thing too."

    tanong ko rin yan. na sana masagot hehehe

    iba talaga pag naiinlab ano? hahaha

    at may isa pa akong tanong.

    " what is the word jeroboam?"

    hehehe

    http://fjordz-hiraya.blogspot.com

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  21. waaaaa...bakit nahuli ako...aheks...basta habol ako...aheks... :)

    naks...na-inlove si Dhi...aheks...oks lng naman yan...pero baka yan naman ang dahilan ng pagkakasakit mo..inde kaya?... aheks... pagaling ka ha?... :)... ^_^

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  22. Hi Friend.. Interesting post.. Nice blog.. Keep up the good work.. Do find time to visit my blog and post your comments.. Take care.. Cheers mate!!!

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  23. to Kosa: salamat sa pagdaan... kaw kelangan pa talagah magtampo ek ek bago dumaan eh noh.... pero okz sige na nga bz kah daw... forgiven nah... lolz... sino inspirasyon.. si ano... yeah syah.. lolz.. yeah kaw den... tumulah kah ren... para masayah... ingatz lagi... =)


    to Ms. Prety Dylan: ahaha... naaliw na naman akoh sau... bumalik kah at nakireply uletz....haha.. na-curious kah ha... lolz.. sino nga bah?.. magandang tanong.. lolz.. ingatz =)



    to Donna Adik: adik!!! na-miss kitahhh... yeah fave koh yang song na yan.. "no air no air"... hehe... ayonz... sensya nah nde kitah nasama don sa buti ka pah... nalimutanz koh may special someone kah palah noh.. ahaha.. poem contest ahh.. anong prize?.. lolz.. aliw tlgah akoh sa koment moh... adik! igatz... =)


    to Good-looking Ron: tagal nga lang dumating minsan... lolz... inspired daw bah akoh?.. hayz... ewan... kakabaliw nga lang minsan... haha.. naaliw akoh sau...jeroboam na word ang pinaka-cool sau... walah kcng mairhyme sa poem eh... wehe.. salamt sa pagdaan... ingatz =)


    to Fjordan: ang isa pang good-lookin' sa blogsphere.. naks... haha.. tanong moh ren bah yan... wehe.. jeroboam?... alak daw atah sabi ni Kuya EJ and King somethin' like dat... 'la kc akong mairhyme sa poem eh... kaya 'unz... jeroboam na lang...


    to Sis Jo: nalagpasan kitahh... hehe.. aliw ka naman... bulong bulong ren... sige bulungan na lang tayoh... may bubulong akoh... *&&()_#$%**())^^%$#&*((* ayonz.. sikreto lang naten 'un ha... wehe... yeah papagaling pa ren... ingatz lagi sistah... =)


    to Sriam:... thanks for droppin' by.. take care! =)


    to Kuya Bhoyet: weeee... hehe... oo nga eh.. na-late kah... lolz.. oh yeah siguro nga... love make me sick too... lolz... ingatz lagi kuyah... =)



    GODBLESS yah'll... =)

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